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December 29, 2012
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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
10/4000 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
105 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 29, 2012, 10:12:36 AM
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Black Heart by MmichelleeJ Black Heart by MmichelleeJ
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Critique by CGiraldez Dec 29, 2012, 4:34:31 PM
... just some ideas summed up in a few sentences
    what I like:

  • the serene feeling of the "wondering" and curious swan;
  • the detail shown in its black feathers;
  • the way you "broke" the rule of the thirds but we can still find the Fibonacci spiral if we look attentively;
  • the natural colours - few or none digital editing.

    what could be improved:

  • a more precise focusing on the head and eye of the swan;
  • some more colour saturation respecting the natural white balance;
  • the reflex of the swan on the water surface should have included its head.


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:iconcrazygardener:
crazygardener Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Excellent capture!!!
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:iconmmichelleej:
MmichelleeJ Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thanks :D
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:iconcrazygardener:
crazygardener Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
your welcome
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:iconactordavidtran:
ACTORDAVIDTRAN Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Black swan! XD
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:iconmmichelleej:
MmichelleeJ Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Photographer
They are beautiful!
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