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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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what I like:
- the serene feeling of the "wondering" and curious swan;
- the detail shown in its black feathers;
- the way you "broke" the rule of the thirds but we can still find the Fibonacci spiral if we look attentively;
- the natural colours - few or none digital editing.
what could be improved:
- a more precise focusing on the head and eye of the swan;
- some more colour saturation respecting the natural white balance;
- the reflex of the swan on the water surface should have included its head.
I tried to be constructive but this is only my opinion.
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